Don’t know why
Missing you a lot
You are not my friend
You are not my love
Even then
Don’t know why
Missing you a lot.
We haven’t met ever
We just hear voice
Only once
Even then
Don’t know why
Missing you a lot
Such a long time
You are busy with work
You want to reach very high
I want to see you fly
Even then
Don’t know why
missing you a lot
It doesn’t mean
That I love you
It doesn’t mean
That I have some thing for you
It doesn’t mean
That you know about this
Even then
Don’t know why
Missing you a lot…
my first ever attempt in English.
induravisinghj
कुछ शख्शियत, अपनी छाप छोड़ते हैं ….
प्रभावशाली रचना !
what ever you may say
it is your charm and elegance
that makes you thin like that
keep it up,
it makes a soothing reading
good effort. don’t know why missing you a lot.
wonderfully honest poem… they say blessed are the words which are true to the emotions they r inspired from…. well penned
आपके साईट पर यह मेरी पहली टिपण्णी है. आपकी कविताओं की श्रंखला में यह कविता मुझे वाकई बहुत अच्छी लगी. निरंतर लिखते रहे, आता रहूँगा. शुभकामनाएं !
for a first attempt this is really nice. very simple n nice Indu
indu,
dont know why your words sounds so innocent and true to your emotions, but guess inspirations to write come to you so naturally… good one..keep decorating words with your emotions.. yr eyes shows yr creativity. …….
Thanks for the mail was a bit busy really……
Very impressive,
This is just because of the matching bandwidth or say the frequencies of thoughts and mind that we feel missing someone unknown to us too….
Hiredayanubhuti he atama ke awaz hoti hai
baki sansar me to chik pukar hoti hai…………….
Regards,
From the desk of:
Agarwal P.F.
Well said!
Regards
Very nice beginning. I struggle to read and understand Hindi, so I often don’t get past the first few lines of your poems. I am old school so I find myself uncomfortable with SMS style contractions, and I know that even among very progressive modern poets this is an issue, but every poet has to find his or her own unique language. Your feelings have come through beautifully. Keep writing and sharing.
वाह …बहुत ही अच्छी प्रस्तुति ।
simple and sweet Indu…nice first attempt
and a good one toooo.. and now i can comment in english too he he he
Ah !! At-last English verse ..Sounds great .Hmm I feel like this poem is suitable for those who fall in love at first sight hehe
don’t know why
missing u a lot
u r not my friend
u r not my love
even then
don’t know why
missing u a lot.
sometimes we miss someone without any reason….but who is this someone…? we don’t know……
Nice. Let this be your stepping stone for greater heights.
Very honest first attempt
Beautiful as always.
Wow! Nice poem
Medium may be different but the soul is same.
Congratulations ! Your first attempt is too good . A nice thought . Keep up the good work . All the best for many more such attempts . God bless you .
very good poem at first attempt in English.
http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_are_signs_a_guy_likes_you_that_you_might_be_missing
Indu, This is beautifully written…..
Simple and Neat! You should write more poems in English for non-Hindi speaking folks around……..Good luck!
very beautiful…..loved a lot and waiting for mooooooooor
That was a beautiful poem!
cute
Very good! And your English skills are excellent.
उत्कृष्ठ लेखन के लिए बधाई
Very nice. Would like to see more English poems..
Also! don’t known why? belatedly inspired.:)
What is known! have poetic ‘spatical intelligence’,
and prominent in your own terms, wish to carry on..
Good one, keep it up…
simple and beautiful.
Not bad for a first attempt…keep going girl:)
nice try
and a good start
Thanks to all of you, for liking my first English poem & giving your encouraging comments. always needed for your wishes….
Regards
indu
Dear Induji,
Apologies for taking the liberty to shorten your name. This is the first time i am commenting on your blog. That is primarily because I am not too good at Hindi and I think i am not qualified enough to do so.
Though i can speak Bombay Hindi which unlike your language is not in the purest form.
Coming back to your poem I cannot call it your attempt…. because it is really good and expressed with a child like innocence and simplicity.
Keep up the good work
Blogger Jags
http://jskolur.blogspot.com
-very informative blog you have there.cheers
Don’t know why u are not writing more…….:
I have presented The Versatile Blogger Award to you
http://rahul-aggarwal.blogspot.com/2012/01/versatile-blogger-award.html
speechless !
Congratulations on your successful first attempt!
wow lovely am sure u mst really like that person alot at least if nt love..very well written
do read my poetry THE ANTHEM:
http://campbuzzz.blogspot.com/2012/01/anthem.html
Awesome Expressions of the Deep Feelings…
Do Check Out My Blog, You Might Find Interesting…
http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/
I liked this piece very much and do know why, becaused this is too good!
good attempt at releasing your angst ..
It is really full of feelings. Can almost feel what you have written. At times, we feel lots of odd things for that someone without reason. I don’t know why too!!
This is a very nice attempt
Lovely poem..simple words but very intense!!
u r really good
wonderful!
Good Start… looking forward to many more!
is it ur first attempt?i won’t believe..looks great dear.wonderful lines
You are an excellent writer, Indu and that can be a problem. When you choose a title like “Don’t know why”, fools like me come expecting a bit too much. I adore the haunting song as sung by Norah Jones. I hope you get what I mean. However, I will return ton your blog again.
very nice…and good
very nice ..mesmerizing effect……keep going…gud luck
This is simple and beautiful…Continue to write more…:)
very well expressed.
keep writing. looking forward to read some more of your english poems:)
http://anshsaransh.blogspot.com/2012/01/my-wolf-dancer.html
Amazing !!
वाह वाह….Kavita’s
i dont know why…you said its my first attempt
Nice one for the first attempt !
keep writing…
Nice poem. Liked the simplicity
sweet, simple but poignant! Do write more in english.
don’t know how you wrote so wonderful
Your lines reminded me of this song…”तुम्हें हो न हो मुझको तो इतना यकीन हैं मुझे प्यार तुमसे नहीं है नहीं है “…Don’t know whether you’ve heard this song or not…simple lines convey a lot