शायराना अंदाज़-6


“न मिल कर सुकूं
न दूर जा कर ही,
इससे तो बेहतर था
बस ख़यालों में रहना”

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17 responses to “शायराना अंदाज़-6

  1. wah indu ji phir se khayalo me
    har baar irado me
    aap to baas
    le jate hai hamen
    pyar ki vadiyon me ……:)

  2. ख्याल सच में पेन ड्राइव की तरह होते हैं। साथ बहुत सा ले कर चल सकते हैं बिना बोझ(?)।

  3. khayalo mein kahan hai sukun
    nazarein milti hi nahi
    is se to behatar tha
    aankhon se ishaare karna

  4. sukoon kee talaash mein
    ab aur naa bhataknaa
    sukoon insaan ke dimaag
    mein hota
    maange se kabhee naa miltaa

  5. Dragonuv

    Nostalgic, old world and with a nice flow ! Good one !

  6. Kab tak khyaoolyian mein rakhenge..kabhi phir mann karega ko jo khayoolein mein aate hain woh sammne bhi aaye🙂
    Dil ko behlane ke liye Induji khayal acha hai

  7. Indu ji aapki to jabardast fan following hai bhai !! And you are writing so well. Ravi knew about this talent of yours or just got Lucky🙂 Its a pleasure to visit your blog and read your poems and articles. I am not putting individual comments : for me all of them are great. Kaash ki main aisa likhta aur itna popular hota…….keep it up !!!

  8. ख़यालों की दुनिया ही अलग होती है ….सुंदर पंक्तियाँ

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